One Step Ahead Evaluation

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Audience Feedback

Audience Feedback

The internal viewing of our class opening sequences gave us good feedback to use as a base for improvement.

Our positive feedback:

• Good edits/cuts
• Good use of mise-en-scene
• Titles well-presented
• Good variety of shots

Our Negative feedback:

1. Some of our shots were too dark. To fix this we are going to use gel filters over the lights so that we can film during the day and use effects when editing to make it look dark.
2. Some of the framing in our shots end up with heads cut off. To fix this we have to go back and do a pick up shot of the detective scene where Joei's body is halfway out of the frame.
3. The car scene was too long. We are going to re film the car scenes because we need to have more variety in the types of shot so that it doesn't get boring.
4. Titles at the beginning are too fast. We are adding effects to the titles so it will end up being a lot slower, and we are also going to add a few more shots into the first sequence so that the titles last for longer.

All of these decisions were made as a group and we agreed that these were relevant criticisms that needed to be dealt with and changed.